Indie Ink Challenge time again. I enjoyed it so much I figured I’d give it another go.
I was issued a challenge from Carrie over at Views From Nature.
Thanks Carrie for stretching the brain cells. They need it from time to time.
Hmmm…this one took a while to do.
Then, half asleep the words started battling around in my head, so out of bed I sprang and the following is the result.
Love to hear your opinions on it.
All feedback will be really appreciated – and taken on board.
I, in turn, challenged Rachel McGowen at learningtowhistle – and she did a great piece of writing if you want to check it out
Carrie’s challenge was:
She didn’t know how, but she had to stop the burning…
The sweat melts into her frame
boiling into her bones
tattooing this moment
upon her spirit
the heat of her hands
against the icy exterior
grip the herald tighter,
awaken her eyes yell
as my eyes felt you
as I once tasted
your words iced with hate
blue irises fire with fear
and she loosens
blood cools against the white linen
and the burning eases
she wraps her coat tightly against her breast
her breath exits in a frosty cloud
as she hits the floor
For another Indie Ink Challenge I completed check out The Watcher