the meat falls from the drumstick
as it rises to his mouth
more than my food
is fed to him
at this table
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When I let go of what I am, I become what I might be. – Lao Tzu
the meat falls from the drumstick
as it rises to his mouth
more than my food
is fed to him
at this table
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Wonderful, Jo! Like I said before it’s like you’re pioneering a kind of KiwiAussie Haiku.
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What a lovely thought…
😉
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Hello sailor…
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He’s cute isn’t he !!!! All to do with the right genes…hehe
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Sailors beware!
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More like Big Wide World beware…
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Who is the handsome sailor?
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The Son…
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Wow he’s lush! I have a handsome sailor son too!
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He is isn’t he Gilly – sailor sons are so lovely. He just went home yesterday and I miss him already. 😦
So – time to put a piccy up of your handsome lad isn’t it…so we can all ohhhhh and ahhhhhhh over him.
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I like balladeer’s comment, kind of like a Kiwausiku. 😉
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Okay now say that word…go on…
😉
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Love it. And like the others said, the sailor is handsome.
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Thank you – he is that…
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you rock.
happy new year.
Thanks for the love to poets rally, keep it up.
smiles.
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Thank you – happy new year to you too.
🙂
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Excellent Jo:)
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Thanks Jake.
🙂
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Your son is quite handsome. Apples don’t fall far from the tree. I am enjoying your haiku-esque poems. Poems should be brief. They should crystalize language to the fewest words possible to convey a message, thought, idea… Thank you! You’ve been very busy.
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He is very handsome !! And I love the ‘apples/tree’ compliment – though I think it is a bit of a sore point with him being compared to Mum…hehe
🙂
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A very nice entry my great friend,
and i trust that this is your son? 🙂
I can now see the concept of your
stones a day challenge 🙂
Androgoth XXx
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Glad to see you get it my friend. And yes this is THE SON. Isn’t he magnificent !!!!
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Jo, you are very talented with this daily stone challenge! Great photo of your son as well.
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Thanks ! He is lovely !!!
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