For Sara – from my heart to yours.
The sky is waiting for you.
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my breath slows
in time with your beating wings
your downward draught
a gust of air
a sweet taste
against my skin
don’t go
my eyes call out
I hear your soul
breaking as you navigate
the cross currents
dashing against you
like velvet covered bars in a cage
holding you
freedom just a vision of torment
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nullibicity = state of being nowhere
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This post was written for ABC Wednesday: the letter N
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Published by Jo Bryant
I was born in the land of Banjo Paterson, gum trees, and weather extremes.
I am a freelance photographer. I love to make images that make people happy. To capture forever a precious moment.
I am also a freelance writer/editor.
I live in the Bay of Plenty, New Zealand, but still like to claim my Australian heritage.
I graduated with a Bachelor of Communications in 2008.
I am writing my first novel.
I love to write poetry, short stories, and also write for the web.
And there is nothing that is on a par with a sunny summer's day spent at Waihi Beach.
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Perfect. for tonight. for all I feel. she feels? thank you.
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I’m feeling numb from the whole day, thank you Brynne.
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you aren’t alone, my friend. Maybe thats why my post was about taking a nap! ha! thank *you*, Jo.
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I had to go out – which turned out to be a good thing – got my mind elsewhere for a couple of hours. Hope you sleep well. 🙂
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Hi, Jo
I didn’t know the word ‘nullibicity’, but your beautiful and sad poem somehow sums up its meaning more than the definition you give at the end. And for some reason, interestingly, given the title of this post, the poem felt circular, so that as I got to the end, I was irresistibly drawn to the start again. ‘Velvet covered bars’ is a very striking and original image.
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What a beautiful comment – you don’t know how welcome your words are tonight – especially for this poem. I really appreciate it – a lot.
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Now THAT’S a great word. And the poem goes well with it.
ROG, ABC Wednesday team
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Thanks ROG – I love finding all these new words – using them.
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such a sad time for the beaches! c
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I think my dearest Cecilia – this comment should be on this post…hehehehehehe
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What the hell is happening with New Zealand media and the Rena ??
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Lovely poem with a new-to-me word as an extra bonus. Now I want to erect it on a roadsign: “Welcome to Nullibicity.” My ABC Wednesday this week is Neil Armstrong.
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Thanks Roy.
I like new-to-me words – no I don’t…
I love ’em
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Nullibicity is a new word to me, thank you for sharing it’s meaning.
Nostalgic, is one of my ABC entries. Come by any time you get a chance. Have a great day!
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Thanks.
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A great word nicely handled.
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Thank you Anthony
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I appreciate your saying so…
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Actually, N is for NICE! 🙂 Beautiful flow and imagery, a gift to those in need. If there is any good by being nowhere, it’s that no matter what direction you take, you’re going somewhere.
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The poet is also a wise philosopher !!!
Glad you liked it – and understood …
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A beautiful poem! It’s very thought-provoking, yet visceral.
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Thanks Theresa – it came out of a very visceral thought provoking experience…
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Beautiful poem. My first time hearing nullibicity. Will have to look it up! Thanks.
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Glad you liked it. 🙂
Definition is: [fr. L. nullibi, nowhere] (or nullibiety, or nullibility) – the condition or attribute of being nowhere; non-existence
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Very lovely poem.
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Thanks Rajesh 🙂
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There’s a strong sense of quiet desperation here – you captured helplessness so well.
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thank you – I love it that you felt that in the poem – sometimes you wonder if your message is getting across…
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wow! what a great choice!
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Thanks Mrs D !!!!!
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honestly, I’m not familiar with this word…ehhehe…thanks for sharing!
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I don’t think there are many people that are !!! I look for words like NULLIBICITY specificaly because of that.
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Hi, Jo…I knew you had a lovely way with words, but I wasn’t aware you were a good poet, too. It might be because, somehow, I wasn’t subscribed to your blog so I missed a lot of your posts. Now that I’ve clicked ‘follow’ and checked the ‘notify me of new posts via email’ box, I should be able to keep up with your writing.
This poem is beautiful, there’s a lot of emotion flowing through it, and I can’t wait to go back to your archives and see what other gems you’ve got there….Also looking forward to your future posts 🙂
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Thank you Didi – I love poetry – which was a surprise. Well – I knew I loved it from childhood – but I had no idea how much until I took a poetry paper and the deep love affair with it really began.
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I wonder that nullibicity is so common… sometimes we feel it on daily basis 😛
Nice Read !!
Random Scribblings
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I think it surrounds us – but it doesn’t have to be a bad thing. The possibilities are there.
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Nice to use an unusual word and then the meaning somehow forming a trapped destination at the end of the poem.
Like the other comments not a word I knew either, interesting to read its origin.
Having read far too many SF stories or perhaps I can imagine it being used at an alternate reality – you are now arriving at Nullibi-city. Or perhaps something darker from Murakami. .
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I like the sound of that – methinks you’ve given me an idea…
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Beautiful Jo, you’ve made a beautiful poem a wondrous one. 🙂
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Thanks Cap’n – I hope it finds its way to her…
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N is for “Nailed it”, Jo. You captured it perfectly and worded it beautifully. To try to cheer you up – Since I always think of you as “The Queen of the Rustlers” I thought it might bring a smile to your face to have the Golden West College Rustlers named as your official College Football team. They’re in Huntington Beach, CA. Michelle Pfeiffer and Viveca Fox went there. I sent you an e-mail with a picture of their helmets.
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Awwww – thanks for doing that. It did and does cheer me up.
My own official College Football team – love it.
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And I think I like/love the mascot – seen here celebrating his 40th birthday !!!!!
Does this mean I have to learn the rules ??
I am still struggling with rugby.
And tonight we have the Rugby World Cup final for 3rd and 4th place here between the Australia and Wales !!!!!!!
And on Sunday France plays the All Blacks.
Go ALL BLACKS !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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Wow! You redefine the word “interactive” the way you always enhance the comments people leave! I’m glad you like Rustler Sam, their mascot! Currently the team is 3-3, and from now on in my Sunday recap of Saturday’s action I’ll mention you and your blog every time I give a Rustlers game recap.
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Oh well now I am just gonna burst with happiness. I love having a football team of my own – wait til I tell the kiddywinkles.
Just about jumping with glee !!!!!!
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Jo,
This is a lovely tribute. I’m so upset about Sara’s abrupt disappearance. I didn’t realize how much I was attached to her blog and comments until she was gone. Ed filled me in. Take care.
Cathy
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Hi Cathy – I understand how you feel – I think we all miss her. Thanks for the lovely comment 🙂
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Beautiful word. And your words sing in such lovely fashion.
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Thank you
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Nicely done! Beautiful Poem!
So sorry it has taken me so long to stop by. . .from last weeks M…I have been sleeping! because of the flu!! Nasty thing had me kNocked out!!!
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So sorry to hear that Lisa – but glad to see you are up and about again.
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This was a new word for me and now I will never forget it, with such beautiful meaning behind it.
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Thank you Robin – that means a lot. Now if it will only fly to its intended destination….
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I feel certain that it will.
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With all the positive energy coming in – I think you might be right.
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Excellent … love your poems..
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Thank you Sue…
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This was a beautiful tribute but why is her blog gone? 😦 I love the word and the poem is so heart-felt. So would someone be kind enough to let me know why she’s missing? Went to read one of her most recent entries and it said the blog was no longer available????
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Have sent you an e-mail.
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