#
The Bard’s Song of Meadhbh and Ciaran
#
his hooves drummed a rhythm upon the dark earth
only against the the star dappled sky could any hint of him be seen
but his call rocked the timbers in the walls
shaking loose the fears of those that dwelled within
and she knew what he sought
felt the seduction that rode the shore searching
tied to the frosty highland air and its frozen soil
she fought the threads of attraction
stretching from her soul to the call he sent out to her
every eventide when the black of the loch
was indistinguishable from the air around it
for the bard had foretold of their tale
before the season of their birthings
it was sung of at the gatherings
she had known from childhood that the
maid in the tale wore her clothing,
looked out of her eyes
if none other understood its meaning
her hesitance came not from fear
for she already knew the ending
but to leave a lifetime behind is not done easily
with each rising on the moon he became
more insistent,
the thread grew stronger,
the call more compelling
fields barren with the lengthening cold and dark approaching
she made ready for her departure
not that she had need of things
but burned in her heart was a desire to make the
burden of her loss less
for those who had nursed her to womanhood
on the eve of Samhain as they hunkered in their beds
against the chilled night air she let the door slide closed behind her
running barefoot she tore her garments
abandoning the cloak of her life
in the ebony stillness he could not be heard
she knew this was of no matter
she felt his anticipation
was now free of more than just her clothing
his black eyes reflected in the dark
two shining moons
beacons
the moment her flesh rested against his broad back he sprung away
they rode free along the shore
with each stride the joining became more tangible
before the first hint of another sun rose on the horizon
they were gone
the surface of the loch mirror smooth
giving no hint of their passing
*****
*****
Kelpie: The kelpie is a supernatural water horse from Celtic mythology. It is believed to haunt the rivers and lochs of Scotland and Ireland; the name kelpie possibly is derived from Scottish Gaelic cailpeach or colpach “heifer, colt”
*****
This is this weeks submission to ABC Wednesday
Great image, and an even better Poem. I could feel the dark muscles of the Water Horse in your words, with the smooth feminine thread that tied the words together. Beautiful, you could make a story from what you have here. 🙂
LikeLike
Thanks Cap’n – I thought you might be drawn to this one. 😉
Actually the thought of a story had crossed my mind…
I love mythology – especially Kelpies and Selkies and the like – oh and I LOVE anything to do with Scotland and the Highlands/Highlanders.
Now isn’t he just yummy enough to eat !!
LikeLike
Even before scrolling down, I knew the second image was going to be included in your response. You’re as bad as I am. 🙂
LikeLike
I know – you’re rubbing off on me – pirates and highlanders – what is a girl to do ????
LikeLike
Speaking of stories, yes, you should write this one. Responded to your question r.e. my book in Sara’s comments.
LikeLike
Hmmmmmmm – will speak to the muse.
Off to Sara’s place right this minute.
LikeLike
Great picture and wonderful poem, you put a lot of thought into it.
LikeLike
I try DP – and apparently I am trying so I am told – hehehehe
So glad you liked it – I love all that legend and mythology stuff.
🙂
LikeLike
An (almost) seasonal poem. Nifty imagery.
ROG, ABC Wednesday team
LikeLike
Thanks Roger 🙂
LikeLike
wow! very interesting…thanks for dropping by!
LikeLike
Glad to hear you think so – thank you also for popping in here. 🙂
LikeLike
Great post and visual for K. I liked this a great deal.
LikeLike
Glad as always to hear that from you. 🙂
Thank you.
LikeLike
Very interesting topic and I love anything supernatural… Great post
Pheno, ABCW Team
LikeLike
Thank you
😉
Me too – love the supernatural I mean
LikeLike
Wonderful poem.
LikeLike
Thanks Rajesh – I appreciate you stopping by and commenting. 🙂
LikeLike
This story reminds me of reading Diana Gabaldon’s Outlander series…Powerful poem…and thanks for the history on kelpie
LikeLike
What a lovely comment for you to leave – love it. 🙂
LikeLike
What a compelling poem…”burned in her heart was a desire to make the… burden of her loss less”… Archetypal in its call for transformation… or is it just an escape fantasy? 🙂
LikeLike
Hello Francisca – lovely to see you here.
Perhaps it is possible to be a small amount of both ??
At least that is how I see it.
😉
LikeLike
I can see how transforming can enable an escape from the old… but escaping does not necessarily lead to transformation… or does it…? Perhaps you are right, Jo. 🙂
LikeLike
Maybe the answer lies in what we are looking for ??
LikeLike
Very nice Jo.
Kids at Heart is one of my ABC this week.
LikeLike
Thanks Rose 🙂
LikeLike
Fabulous tapestry of words you woven here! This would’ve put Freud in overdrive, for sure!
LikeLike
Now that I like the sound of…
LikeLike
I really don’t want to meet this “horse”, looks very scary !
LikeLike
He’s not as scary as he looks – it’s all that water gives him a frightening countenance I think. Though legend has it that they eat their riders – well mine is more lover than eater…
😉
LikeLike
You are a true Kelt at heart. I love Scotland too , because it looks like Norway and New Zealand. I was once in Scotland, once in NZ and very often in Norway. I am very much interested in the Celtic areas in GB. We often stayed in Cornwall and several times in Wales.
Thanks for sharing these videos with us.
Thanks for your visit and for the address you gave me. It’s indeed a very nice blog.
LikeLike
Hello again Wil – great to see you here. 🙂
I think it is the Irish blood that still runs in my veins. But I adore the Celtic mythology. It is so rich and has so many facets to it. And – there is something about a man – a big, bloody, brooding Scot that sends my blood trilling…
LikeLike
I am often in Australia as my youngest daughter lives in Queensland, Cooktown. I have never seen the big red kangaroo but I saw plenty wallabies, and I know a woman who looks after orphaned joeys. They are quite tame.Thanks for sharing your stories.
LikeLike
I think dear Wil – you meant this for Cheryl’s blog…hehehehehe
LikeLike
lOVED it! For life of me I cant create this magicc outa verses…
LikeLike
Thank you for saying so – I love that you enjoyed it. 🙂
LikeLike
this is marvelous!!!
LikeLike
Thank you !!
LikeLike
Awesome poem and a very interesting story behind it. I learned something of Celtic mythology as well. Glad I stopped by!
LikeLike
Thank you – glad I was able to illuminate something of the mythology
🙂
LikeLike
Loveliness in imagery and poetry.
LikeLike
What a nice thing to say !!
LikeLike
Super post. Great prose, great image, and I love Tull! Thanks.
LikeLike
Thanks Meryl – Tull really got the mood with this one for me.
LikeLike
That poem was intense. I agree, what a story that would make. Just…wow! They eat the rider? I did not know this, but perhaps if your words are at all accurate, this too would be an equisite experience. As a moth to a flame. Some say that moment is bliss. Write it, write,
p.s So are you going to write it?
LikeLike
Well – how can I not after that request. Love the video BTW. But he’s NOT going to eat her – as a writer I can change things like that…hehehehe
LikeLike
Mystical marvel. I’m glad your kelpie is a lover and not an eater. A local valley here has a banshee legend but the deep water and rising screes would make perfect kelpie country.
LikeLike
Sounds amazing – I wish I lived in a place of legends – would be sooooo cool.
LikeLike
What? I’m sorry… Australia, New Zealand… no legends. Reeeally? This from Miss Researcheseverything. 🙂
LikeLike
Okay – yeah we do have legends.
The Bunyip is an aussie one that I am researching at the moment.
Fascinating is the Bunyip !!
But I have a love affair going with Celtic mythology at present.
However, I am a fickle woman – so that could change at any moment.
LikeLike
Great Poem… and do you know I had never heard of the Kelpie.. you live and learn… and I love it when I find out something I didnt know….. And I have visited a few lochs in Scotland.. and didnt even get to see Nesse
Hope you are well Jo…
LikeLike
Hi Sue,
Lovely to see you here again.
It was only recently I learned about kelpies – I was actually looking up kelpie dogs – I had one for 17 years – and well, I found this legend and then got completely sidetracked as I do.
Scotland is on the bucket list. What a fascinating place it must be – where in Scotland did you go to ?
LikeLike
Many places over several years of trips… Oban, Fort William.. Isle of Sky, Loch Lomond.. and Loch Ness Glasgow, and many more names of places lodges somewhere in this grey matter LOL..
Arrrh to your Kelpie 17 yrs is a long long time to say goodbye to a dear friend… Wishing you well 🙂 x
LikeLike
It all sounds wonderful.
It was very hard to say goodbye to Tia.
I had her before I had the kiddiewinkles – she was the MOST amazing dog.
I have never known an animal with such a beautiful nature.
Her soul was pure and perfect and I think of her everyday of my life – I feel blessed that for part of my existence she was a force in it. 🙂
LikeLike
Fascinating – thanks for this!
LikeLike
So glad you thought so. 🙂
LikeLike
Absolutely fantastic!!
LikeLike
Wow – what a great comment – thank you 🙂
LikeLike
Wonderful story, fascinating poem. I’ve never heard of kelpies before, but there does seem to be a germ of a good story there.
LikeLike
So i have been told – I may have to look into it.
LikeLike
Who could not be attracted to the Kelpie – beauty, strength, power.
LikeLike
I found their attraction compelling as well.
LikeLike
Your posts never disappoint either! Well done.
LikeLike
Awwwwwww – thank you for saying that – you made my coffee taste better…
LikeLike
A very powerful magical and mystical creature and the stories are so much like that of mermaids and unicorns, rising from the deep!! Brrrrr…. shudder at the thought of being dragged down by one of them!! I hate being lured, and this often happens when salesmen come knocking at the door to con me with all kinds of things!! 🙂 Thank you for the excellent topic you shared for K-day!!
LikeLike
It is a wonderful legend – but like most legends it has its harsh side. Still, my Kelpie isn’t planning on killing or eating her…he has very different intentions. LOL
LikeLike
Glad to see you share,
your piece is very deep and entertaining, wow, some amazing stuff in the comments too.
bless you.
Happy Belated Halloween.
LikeLike
Thank you so much for stopping by and for taking the time to comment – love that you did. 🙂 Yes – the comments get interesting on here at times – love that too.
LikeLike
a story, with fantasy theme, your words travel far, in very dark and haunting senses,
a job well done.
LikeLike
Thank you for your kind comment
🙂
LikeLike
Terrific entry! I have nominated you for The Versatile Blogger Award:
http://seabell.wordpress.com/2011/11/02/the-versatile-blogger-award/
LikeLike
Thank you so much – I am honoured – I will write about it soon – but I have just done an award post so I may leave it for a little while – please don’t think that means I am not thrilled with this and with your thinking of me.
🙂
LikeLike