longing
that’s the bones of it
my bones
my frame
the hunger scratches an abyss
long raking bloody ridges burn deep
running from heart
volvere
unconfined, immured
juxtaposed adversaries
an elemental keening
to infuse the torrents
caressing the flesh
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calling
crying
convening
convoking
collecting
#
come
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This poem is written for the photo prompt over at Magpie Tales #84
Check out what others have done in response to this photo.
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I also submitted it to Poetry Pantry #68 over at Poets United
The definition of appetence: “strong desire,” c.1600, from Fr. appétence “desire,” from L. appetentia “longing after something,” noun of state from appetentem (nom. appetens), prp. of appetere – sourced at: The Online Etymology Dictionary. http://www.etymonline.com/index.php?allowed_in_frame=0&search=longing&searchmode=none
Fabulous. I can feel the want. Ooh, I love what you did with the image. : )
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Thanks 🙂 The image adjustment wasn’t me – you can Google it. I usually Google the prompts to research any history about them, and I found it online as a gif.
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aside from liking this post… it added words to my vocabulary… love it…
JJRod’z
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Glad on this end – both that you liked it, and that I added to your vocabulary… 😉
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I love the word “volvere”…
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Thanks Tess – I liked that word myself.
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I liked the end best of all. It could almost stand on its own.
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Thank you Roy – I appreciate your saying so. 🙂
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Hey, wow, did you turn this into an animated gif file? The rain is falling! That is so cool!
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No not me – Google the image and you will find it.
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Nice writing Jo! Awesome how you got the rain falling!
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calling
crying
convening
convoking
collecting
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come
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That is haunting. I can almost hear these words hanging in the rain.
PS: Er, how does one “google” an image which hath no name?
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So glad you liked this one Em. 😉
There are a couple of ways to Google an image:
1. If you hover your mouse over the image sometimes a name will pop up – this one did with ‘woman-in-rain’ or something like that. You can then type that into Google images.
2. I think I typed in ‘Woman in the rain’ in Google Images (because that’s what it looked like) and just went looking – and there it was.
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Hey, Jo. Thanks for the info on googling images. You helped me find…
Well, please have another look at my poem and let me know what you think.
How’s that for suspense…LOL 😀 (Oh, and, BTW, I AM being serious her…heh, heh, heh.)
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Clever lady – the video is amazing. 😉
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Jo- A vision of loveliness…
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Thank you Laurie for stopping by and making that wonderful comment. 🙂
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Jo, I liked this poem a lot. I especially like the way you used ‘c’ words in the last part of it. And the one word lines added to the strong effect of your message.
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Thank you Mary – I really appreciate your comment. It makes my day when you stop by and actually like something I have written – so thanks again.
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Jo,
Very innovative,very refreshing! I find discoveries, many new things in your posting. In the essence,contents/vocab and the form. Thanks for sharing! The verse is fascinating!
Hank
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Thank you Hank – it is wonderful to hear that you get so much from it 🙂
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Jo,
I really enjoyed reading ‘Appetence’. There was an obvious build up to a crescendo of all the c-words, crying out and full of desire.
Loaded with atmosphere………..
Eileen
Thank you Jo for your supportive comments at my Blog. Much appreciated!
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Hi Eileen,
So glad you found it so – it is easy to be supportive of good writing. 🙂
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Beautifully written, I like the strong emotions evoked, but even more the contrast between soft and hard tones as the poetry slipped forward.
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Thank you for that wonderful comment. 🙂
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I just wasn’t going down the ordinary road with this- and you found a few twists too. thanks for visiting.
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Twists are great places to go I feel – so interesting and so compelling…
😉
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The way you are passionate about everything is so refreshing. I will now call it a variation of one of your commenters coments. Ready? I love the channel Jo-a-vision. ha! The picture is so perfect a match for the poem. I can feel this.
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Jo a-vision. Kewl – like that one A LOT – A REAL LOT.
Hehehehehe
😉
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I will be looking for oppertunities to use my new vocab word in sentences too. 🙂
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I’ll be waiting to see if you pop those sentences up where we can see them dear lady…hehehehehehehe
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I love the difference in tone from beginning to end. Builds like a crescendo. Wonderful piece.
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Thank you – I appreciate your comment a lot. 🙂
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Absolutely stunning. The image was amazing, yet you even outshone that. I love the way the emotion builds, stretching taut within your words, before the release and finally… well, you know it ends. 🙂
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Thanks Cap’n – hmmmmmmm – how it ends – yes I think I might remember something. 😉
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I’m always learning new things here! I have not heard of ‘appetence’ before – such a lovely word. I’ve stored it away for future use. Your poem is so descriptive and so beautifully evocative that I think I would have realised its meaning by the end without being told. ‘Elemental keening’ is just lovely.
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Oh thank you for those wonderful words. I am so happy you liked it. I did some thesaurus diving today for that one. How I love my thesaurus – were it possible I would do some elemental keening just for that…
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very cool jo…emotive…esp when youget to the cascade of single words…like this much…and def nice touch on finding the animated pic…
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Thank you Brian – I loved finding the animated pic – it just gave me so much atmosphere.
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Yes, an elemental keening … this is a beautifully written poem.
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Thank you Helen – love that you stopped by and commented. 🙂
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o i liked this, it leaves the reader breathless
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Wow – that is a reaction I love. Thank you for telling me that. 🙂
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hm, another little gem from the workshop of Jo Bryant.
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Awwww – what a lovely comment for you to give me. Thank you so much. 🙂
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Stellar, stunning, superb!
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Wow – thank you for those words. 🙂
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Stunning write.
Anna :o]
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Thank you Anna – love that you think so. 🙂
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This is quite an erotic poem – far too hot for a damp English morning;-)
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Oh but what a way to drive out the damp…hehehe
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An elemental keening to infuse the torrents caressing the flesh…
Nice!
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Thanks Kellie – I appreciate your saying so. 🙂
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bare and rare, very outstanding magpie.
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Thank you for your greatly appreciated comment – love it – that you like it. 🙂
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Jo you’re so clever with your poetry. I also sensed some erotica here (or is it just me, and it’s always on my mind..). It’s a timely poem too for me personally, I can relate to the subject matter. Only wish I could say why….. I like the pic.
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Thank you Marcia – yes there is more than some erotica within this one – knew YOU’D get it…hehehehe
The picture spoke to me too – and then I found an animated version of it online – well I was a goner.
The rain – the moving water – her stance – it all screamed sex, and the longing for it !!
😉
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great poem and what you did to the picture was very clever – awesome
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Glad you liked the poem Isobel – I can’t take credit for the picture – I found it online…
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Longing and desire fulfilled. I like the play on ‘elemental’ and this: ‘the hunger scratches an abyss/long raking bloody ridges burn deep’
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Thank you – I really love hearing what people do or do not like in my writing.
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Jo, that is wonderful and it speaks very clearly to me. I came from a different angle, trying to convey a sense of loss, rejection and abandonment but I should just have put a link straight to your piece!
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So glad you liked it.
We all have a different vision of things – one is no better or worse than the other – just different.
Different is good !!
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Hey Jo,
This is powerful since the feelings expressed feel so intense to me. I really like it. That image is freakin cool too. I learned a bunch of new words too!
Cathy
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Hi Cathy – well thank you.
Love that you liked it so much.
I thought it was a cool image as well.
They have some great prompts there for you to work with – that’s why I like doing them – stretches the imagination.
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Love, love the animation–how did you manage it? Very sexy poem. Love the word “volvere” the intensity of bones…
Thank you.
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Found it online at Google Images.
Glad you liked the poem and the word ‘volvere’ – I liked it myself
😉
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