the beginning
a love affair
knowing
the science of man
*
I was
a foot soldier
a teacher
a car dealer
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teach children
hypocrisy
that’s how you survive
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antibiotics aren’t working
we had an incurable disease
two world wars
we’re really awful animals
*
people who need
people
talking about cannibals
*
the good Earth
we could
have saved it
but
we were
too damn cheap and lazy
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I wrote this found poem after reading an interview Kurt Vonnegut gave online.
A link to the full interview is below.
The definition of a found poem is: Found poetry is a type of poetry created by taking words, phrases, and sometimes whole passages from other sources and reframing them as poetry by making changes in spacing and/or lines (and consequently meaning), or by altering the text by additions and/or deletions. The resulting poem can be defined as either treated: changed in a profound and systematic manner; or untreated: virtually unchanged from the order, syntax and meaning of the original. Sourced from Wikipedia.
The Salon Interview: Kurt Vonnegut, published October 8, 1999 on
http://www.salon.com/books/int/1999/10/08/vonnegut_interview
This poem was submitted to Poetry Pantry #66 over at Poets United.
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For more found poetry of mine: Q if for Quiddity
What a powerful piece. I have never read any of his work. I now have a feeling I have been missing out and will now need to catch up. Thanks for posting!
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Thank you – he has a lot to say, both via his books and in interviews.
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wow.. strong stuff.. and sad.. c
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Thank you – the interview with Kurt is strong.
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Thanks for sharing Vonnegut with us… I love it!
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So glad you liked it Laurie. I love the man’s mind and how it worked.
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What a guy. One of my claims to fame is that he married Jill Krementz, my cousin….so I guess that means we are/were related. How fun is that?
Thought of you up at the Italian restaurant in the mtns. today, Jo. Homemade limoncello was calling your name…so was I:)
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Lucky woman – for both the claim to fame and the limoncello.
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You know, Jo…I was never really a fan of Vonnegut but because I’m such a fan of yours, I have read the above poem over and over again. You do that, you know? You highlight things I would normally miss and give my days a beautiful new color that no one else ever could. Thank you, Jo.:)
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I read some of his work a long time ago – wasn’t really keen at first – but I went back to him recently, and discovered things in his work that i could really relate to. in interviews i find he speaks of things that are what i would speak of. 🙂 So glad you enjoy that.
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I sent you an email and a tweet…just want to be sure you get them:)
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🙂
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I was sipping homemade limoncello tonight – yummo…
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Very moving piece.
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Thanks Robyn. 🙂
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powerful… 🙂
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Thank you. 🙂
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powerful few words. collectively makes a thoughtful poem about human failings. mostly about the selfish nature of humans who would do anything to make their lot bigger. they don’t see the greater picture how with them the world will collapse upon them one day. beautiful writing.
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So glad you saw that in it.
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Thanks for sharing this. Love the wit.
Cheap and lazy, couldn’t be bothered — sums up the general population. We are just too much.
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We sure are at times – but then again, some are not. So there is hope. I hope.
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I responded immediately when I saw the title, sorry, I thought it was an ad or a request. Still, I liked Kurt’s poem. 🙂
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Bad funny pirate aren’t you ?? Not Kurt’s poem – mine. Yes I did use his words from an article – so partly Kurt’s, but I chose them, I assembled them. So it’s my poem too – isn’t it ??
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You mean bad in a good way, right? 🙂 Even better that it’s your poem. With the way it’s worded though, saying the poem was from an interview Kurt did, it seemed like it was something he did. You wrote it, it’s your poem. I think you should take credit in a more obvious manner. 🙂
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Always bad in a good way where you are concerned. 😉
Will go fix that right now – though, technically they are his words…
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Is that better Cap’n ??
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Well, if it makes sense to this ‘ol Pirate (and it does quite well, thank you very much 🙂 ) then I’d say yes. As a matter of fact, to make this clear as mud, I do say yes.
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Glad it makes sense – and is not murky as a mirror. 😉
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I like the technique of combining others’ words and phrases in a way to express your own, unique idea, with the allusions adding another layer. You have a little gem here. Love KV as well. Cheers.
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So glad you liked it – this form intriqued me.
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Hey Jo, good to meet you and loving the little corner of the web you have here! What did you mean by number 2? Anywho, I was drawn to this post and it was beautiful. Have a good day, night?
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I meant number 2 in the series – getting it published as well – for number 1 sounds amazing. I love that you were drawn to this post – as I love that you say anywho…
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I like your poem. And thanks for posting that interview with Vonnegut. I have admired him for quite awhile because of his ability to write things so REAL. In reading his stuff, it’s almost like knowing him as a person; he writes in such a way that you feel like he’s right next to you, telling you a story. Anyway, thank you for sharing both! 🙂
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Thank you for reading it and telling me you liked it. BTW – just saw your parrot on the Captain’s blog – hilarious. LMAO
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Another powerful piece. Excellent work.
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Thanks Hook – love that you liked it. 🙂
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This guy always tells it like it is. His books are just a strong. Nice job of creating “found poetry.” I am so glad to learn this phrase as now I do not have to say “I stole this, or worse, plagiarized it!” lol I do not know much about poetry but sometimes like to take a word, a phrase, or idea and build on it. I have felt a bit guilty for doing it, like I was cheating. Of course, we seldom have an truly original thought. I see this a lot when I search for a photo by using my key theme and find many photos with the same idea. Oh, well….
Always interesting to tiptoe around your blog. hugs, pat
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Hi Pat – I read somewhere once that there are actually only something like 9 story ideas – everything else is a variation on just those few ideas. So it is no wonder that we see similar work out there to what we create. it is also one of the reason plagerism is so hard to prove.
So happy you visited and tiptoed about. 🙂
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hmm, found poetry huh? It sounds a lot like what profesional reporters do when they report the news or do an expose’. 🙂 The poem is very powerfull. That you can create poems in so many forms like this is impressive.
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Why thank you ma’am – I have been trying to write a found poem for months, but never really got into anything I read enough, until I read his interview.
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