cause and effect
you said
*
you lied
*
reason ran away,
belief was buried
in a grave
unmarked,
lost
tiny footsteps
tap, tap, tap,
walked through the walls
of my small armoury
and
I
surrendered
#
Written for ABC Wednesday.
When I let go of what I am, I become what I might be. – Lao Tzu
cause and effect
you said
*
you lied
*
reason ran away,
belief was buried
in a grave
unmarked,
lost
tiny footsteps
tap, tap, tap,
walked through the walls
of my small armoury
and
I
surrendered
#
Written for ABC Wednesday.
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So beautiful. So much conveyed here. Tiny footsteps walked through the walls of my small armoury. Lovely.
Visiting from Indie Ink Challenge.
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Thank you for your lovely comment.
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Sometimes we surrender without seeing it coming – the heart is fascinating.
ROG, ABC Wednesday team
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It is a very surprising, and involved, part of us. 🙂
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very nice – I like this bit a lot –
“belief was buried
in a grave
unmarked,
lost”
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I love it that you like that – makes me feel good, coming from you with the awesome pen…
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‘reason ran away’ – beautifully expressed:-)
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Thank you
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Hi,
Thanks for visiting “A Bee’s View.”
What can be said when reason runs away? Little, very little.
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Glad to visit – and thanks for stopping by and taking the time to comment. 🙂
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Many has been the time I chose to harden my heart forever, but then I hear those small innocent footsteps and as much as I wish not to, I too will open my heart. Fortunatly, my armoury is not yet an inpenatrable fortress.
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I wonder if it is possibel to harden that much – maybe it is just not in some of us – I hope so.
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such a lot in so few words!
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Thank you…
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Very creative and imaginative way of expressing yourself. A very sad poem as well. Betrayal, no matter how it comes, is always a painful experience.
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Thank you for that comment. i really appreciate your saying that. 🙂
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🙂
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