Water
Cobalt, Cold
Rising, Falling, Rolling
Summer is almost here
Waves
Chronicles of Illusions
When I let go of what I am, I become what I might be. – Lao Tzu
Water
Cobalt, Cold
Rising, Falling, Rolling
Summer is almost here
Waves
Hey Jo, Thanks! You’ve just taught me something new in poetry.
And from what I’m reading here, I’m sure it’ll suit me just fine ;-D.
Glad to hear it. When I have trouble writing I usually look up a new type of poetry. The discipline of sticking to a formula, and trying something new helps.
Beautiful! The rhythm in the middle is particularly soothing, if that makes any sense.
=)
That is so nice of you to say. It is one of my favourites this one – so it is lovely when others like it as well.
I love your poetry. I have a fascination with water for some reason so the water poems really catch me eye. Thanks for sharing.
What a lovely comment – so glad you liked them and thank you for visiting the blog.
And taking the time to make a comment.
Lovely flow! Suddenly I’m thirsty! Love the colours of the sea; New Zealand is so gorgeous! Lots of beach too; bet you adorable Jack Russell loves his beach walks!
New Zealand is amazing – Chevvy would like me to mention that she is actually a fox terrier…haha
Yes! In fact, I’ll be on the beach tomorrow, my Florida vacation…. so glad I found you
Have a great day.
a lovely poem
Thank you. I love trying out new forms of poetry. So glad to hear that you liked it.
“Rising, falling, rolling”- I like that. It’s like I can see the water. That’s beautiful.
Thank you Claudia – I love that you saw that in my words.
Reads like dis-orientated but smooth haiku. Very interesting!
Thanks…and thanks for visiting.
Thanks for passing by and commenting my blog.
We have some similar interests, I discovered.
I also handle life by writing poetry, among other things…
Mostly in “Dutch” although I also published two English (at least I hope) poems on my blog
Unfortunately I never had them corrected by Englishspeaking Poets … so there may be some spelling-failures and stuff in it.
If you’re interested to read them… feel free : these are the links.
http://dagendauw.blogspot.be/2010/11/eclipse-of-mind.html
http://dagendauw.blogspot.be/2010/11/be-aware.html
Kind regards from
- Dauw –
By the way :
I liked the pictures of the two gorillas in Africa and the sunset in Tahiti.
I ‘ld also love to read more of your poetry… as I could only find this one on your blog.
Ow, and till now I was convinced Bert and Ernie weren’ t aware of their sexuality… again one of my innocent childhooddreams vannished ><
So glad you enjoyed what you found here. If you look at the categories under my twitter button and go to My Poetry (actually just click on My Poetry I have linked it to the page) it will take you to the page that list all my poetry. There are quite a few on here.
Sorry to have destroyed a childhood dream…hehehe
Hi Jo…
You’ re too generous a person. I’m very greatfull for your additions on my two English poems, which I surely will lay to heart.
Thanks a lot … and please forget about that childhooddream, I still have lot’s of nicer ones than that
Thanks also for the link to your poetrypage, I’ll put it in the sidebar of my homepage (http://dagendauw.blogspot.be/). That makes it indeed easier for me to drop by every now and then…
Have an nice weekend and CU
- Dauw -
I am pleased to hear you have more dreams (childhood)…we should always have lots of the.
Thank you for popping me in your sidebar…love to hear what you think of some of the poetry there.
it looks like a haiku , the Japanese poetry you know. Simple and effective.
Haiku is a bit different to this though. I have a friend who is a marvelous haiku poet and she has drilled me on what is and is NOT a haiku.