Water
Cobalt, Cold
Rising, Falling, Rolling
Summer is almost here
Waves
Chronicles of Illusions
Jo Bryant: Kiwi/Australian Writer, Poet, and Potential Amateur Photographer
Water
Cobalt, Cold
Rising, Falling, Rolling
Summer is almost here
Waves
Hey Jo, Thanks! You’ve just taught me something new in poetry.
And from what I’m reading here, I’m sure it’ll suit me just fine ;-D.
Glad to hear it. When I have trouble writing I usually look up a new type of poetry. The discipline of sticking to a formula, and trying something new helps.
Beautiful! The rhythm in the middle is particularly soothing, if that makes any sense.
=)
That is so nice of you to say. It is one of my favourites this one – so it is lovely when others like it as well.
I love your poetry. I have a fascination with water for some reason so the water poems really catch me eye. Thanks for sharing.
What a lovely comment – so glad you liked them and thank you for visiting the blog.
And taking the time to make a comment.
Lovely flow! Suddenly I’m thirsty! Love the colours of the sea; New Zealand is so gorgeous! Lots of beach too; bet you adorable Jack Russell loves his beach walks!
New Zealand is amazing – Chevvy would like me to mention that she is actually a fox terrier…haha
Yes! In fact, I’ll be on the beach tomorrow, my Florida vacation…. so glad I found you
Have a great day.
a lovely poem
Thank you. I love trying out new forms of poetry. So glad to hear that you liked it.
“Rising, falling, rolling”- I like that. It’s like I can see the water. That’s beautiful.
Thank you Claudia – I love that you saw that in my words.
Reads like dis-orientated but smooth haiku. Very interesting!
Thanks…and thanks for visiting.